Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Desktop of Loving Dove















When will i see the rays of light
To feel your arms that hold me tight
When will i find the taste of honey
To feel your lips so sweet so dearly

From a distance land full of sorrow
A shed of tears immediately follow
From a message of love and laughter
A bag of excitement hear in after

And I am saying hold on hold on
For I will be home with flowing passion
Just look at the desktop of loving dove
Reminding that you will forever be loved

5 comments:

saul krisna said...

panalo ang tula mo parekoy... nice... wow inlababo ka talaga sa gf mo ah... lam mo parang blog ng gf mo yan kasi may mga pics siya... wahahaha parang blog ko... musta na? salamat sa pag dalaw kanina sa blog ko...

ingat huh....

sulat ka palagi kasi galing mong mag sulat

Summer said...

Wow! Galing namn! Inspired ang lolo koh.hehehe
More more..=D Love nga nman oo, nagiging makata ang tao..=D

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ransom said...

@ saul krisna: kaya nga tayu nagkakilala kasi pareho tayu obsessed sa girlfriend just want them lang naman to realize na we love them very much.. keep me posted lagi pre ha goodluck

@summer: aside from my gf kaya ako naiinspire magsulat at gumawa ng tula ay dahil sa mga tulad mong nagbibigay ng magandang comment salamat muli.

kuletz said...

the rays of the light will be seen soon...
my warm hugs will be felt like we're in the moon...
the taste of the honey that's sweet so dearly...
is like a wine that taste good yearly...

from a distance we learn honesty and loyalty...
and the love that will lead us lastly...
skip... skip...
putek hon ang hirap dugtungan... nyhahaha

and yes i am holding on
waiting for the dove to come home...

ransom said...

@ kuletz: whahahah hon anu ba yan pinilit na maging rhyme anyways i saw it naman na you just want to say that you love me very much. thanks for the comment hon. i love you